So, I had an idea.

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So, I was thinking of changing a few things about a couple of characters in my book. Any ideas? Feedback?

For Pavel--- In the end of the book, it is revealed that he's sterile, and I had originally planned to make him upset for that fact. Then again, he states in one chapter that he can never see himself spending the rest of his life with a woman, so, kids are out of the question. He's not too good with kids either...... XD. So, anyone think he should be indifferent to his infertility or not? 

Sparrow: I was thinking he should not have any qualms with getting into bed with anyone, but now I think I'm going to make him straight instead of Bi or Pan. He just seems more like that (and it makes for an awkward-cute scene with Pavel in one of the chapters.) No huge change, just his preferences on people. 

Nym: No change here, but if you have any ideas I'd love to hear them! 

Jou'an (Not introduced yet, but I'll say one thing: He's Nym's mate) I was thinking of giving him a prosthetic leg, to sort of go on with my reoccurring theme, different is beautiful. He and Nym, I believe, would make for a more interesting couple if they both had a few differences. Another idea I had is that Jou'an may be a recovered drug addict, and Nym helps him get over that just as he helped Sparrow get over his alcoholism. 

Hmmm... that's all I can think of now. Thanks for stopping by! 
Big hugs and kisses and have a great weekend everyone! 
--Adam. 
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WhimsiKitty's avatar
Hmmmm... for Pavel, I think either way would really work. I can see how he could be disappointed, not because of what he lost, but simply at losing more. You could play it off as a salt-in-his-wounds thing... but honestly, if I were Pavel, I would probably shrug it off.

For Sparrow - definitely. If it leads to awkwardness and cuteness then YES. ^.^

Nym is adorable and perfect. Although I think it would be kind of cute if he slept with a doll or stuffed animal, like a child. *shrugs*

For Jou'an - Prosthetic leg sounds good. Lots of room for character development then. As for the drug thing, as long as it's different enough from Sparrow's experience, so as not to be repetitive, that sounds fine to me. :)