So, I was thinking of changing a few things about a couple of characters in my book. Any ideas? Feedback?
For Pavel--- In the end of the book, it is revealed that he's sterile, and I had originally planned to make him upset for that fact. Then again, he states in one chapter that he can never see himself spending the rest of his life with a woman, so, kids are out of the question. He's not too good with kids either...... XD. So, anyone think he should be indifferent to his infertility or not?
Sparrow: I was thinking he should not have any qualms with getting into bed with anyone, but now I think I'm going to make him straight instead of Bi or Pan. He just seems more like that (and it makes for an awkward-cute scene with Pavel in one of the chapters.) No huge change, just his preferences on people.
Nym: No change here, but if you have any ideas I'd love to hear them!
Jou'an (Not introduced yet, but I'll say one thing: He's Nym's mate) I was thinking of giving him a prosthetic leg, to sort of go on with my reoccurring theme, different is beautiful. He and Nym, I believe, would make for a more interesting couple if they both had a few differences. Another idea I had is that Jou'an may be a recovered drug addict, and Nym helps him get over that just as he helped Sparrow get over his alcoholism.
Hmmm... that's all I can think of now. Thanks for stopping by!
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